Please Critique My Story?
I asked a similar question about the same story yesterday, but I have since edited it.
My story:
Lets say that I live in a small apartment in my mind; what happens if I try to open a window and toxic gases invade my ignored and uncomfortable apartment? Do they send me into a perpetual, clear state of euphoria or make me pass out on the cold floor… Continue reading
Categories: Trivia Tags: brain damage, bringing home, business men, cigarettes, cold floor, dream fields, emotions, euphoria, few coins, hooker, needles, old man, parking lot, small apartment, stench, teddy bear, thief, toxic gases
Teens, Do You Like My Story?
Lets say that I live in a small apartment in my mind; what happens if I try to open a window and toxic gases invade my ignored and uncomfortable apartment? Do they send me into a perpetual, clear state of euphoria or make me pass out on the cold floor, scattered with used needles and give me brain damage? What will happen if they play with my mind? Will they… Continue reading
Categories: Trivia Tags: brain damage, bringing home, business men, cigarettes, cold floor, dream fields, emotions, euphoria, few coins, gay parade, hooker, needles, old man, parking lot, small apartment, smith street, stench, teddy bear, thief, toxic gases
